JOB REQUIRED:
Malaikah had taken a year out to re-apply to university with an emphasis on obtaining an interview at the University of Cambridge.
OUTCOME:
Malaikah supplied us with a comprehensive personal statement to go with her university statement. Although it was full of interesting ideas, our editor Daniel discussed the work with her and then undertook a full edit with the objective of expressing her ideas more clearly for the reader.
EVALUATION:
“Wow, I asked Dan to make a few suggestions but he really spent some time on my personal statement for university applications.
I can’t believe it, my statement looks beautiful now, and it reflected ALL the ideas that I attempted to portray. I’m so happy with it and I’ve got an interview at Cambridge! I can’t even express how thankful and grateful I am for Dan, truly.”